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Revision as of 16:48, 14 March 2024 by Richbodo (talk | contribs) (problem statement needs work)
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This is a prototype main page that is correct and vetted, but strategically should be rewritten. The strategy is to lead with the problem statement that is most relevant to the audience that would most benefit from the toolkit today - superintendants at small schools in the US. That's how we got to:

We all know that we want kids to be more plugged in.

However, discussion to date says that needs to be replaced and a better statement brought in with a segue that leads into the solution more directly.